One night in a forest there was a cottage and in the cottage lived a boy, a mum and a dad. It was in the middle of winter when the mum said we need more food because we have run out! The dad said oh no! I will get the food. The mum said it’s too risky you can’t go who will protect us I will go said the mum. No mum, I will go, not you! But the mum went when she was half way there, she got hurt. Her head was cracked open, she had no idea who the boy or the dad was, she was frosted with ice, she doesn't remember her best friends, she doesn't let the boy go to school and she's always not warm.
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ReplyDeleteHI Jocelyn I really like the colours it is so colourful
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DeleteHi Jocelyn it's me Loise it really like your story it look's so nice
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ReplyDeleteKia ora Jocelyn
My name is Luke and I am in Room 3 at St Mary’s School in Gisborne.
You are good at writing
It was a very interesting story
Maybe you could change the color of your words because I can’t see them.
Can you tell me more that happened
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Mā te wā
Luke